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CarolASpradling Site Admin

Joined: 10 Apr 2008 Posts: 484 Location: Florida
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Posted: Sat May 10, 2008 2:55 pm Post subject: Follow my lead. |
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We will create a story one sentence at a time. You build on the previous sentences. The period, setting, and genre will develop as we go, but let's try to keep the continuity as it becomes established. And please, be respectful.
Hmmm, let's see...rubbing hands together.
Lightning flashed, spotting her admidst the downpour. _________________ Carol
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cale Citizen
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Posted: Sat May 10, 2008 4:46 pm Post subject: |
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| She brushed back her soaked hair, missing a long tendril that laid flat and smooth across her forehead and cheek. |
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brony1 Citizen
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| Her peircing blue eyes, caught in the flash, were ringed by the diamond sparkle of moisture drops held in the web of her long lashes. |
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CarolASpradling Site Admin

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Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 12:38 pm Post subject: |
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Blinking back the rain, she stared after the disappearing coach. _________________ Carol
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DeliaM Colonist

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Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 12:40 pm Post subject: |
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| She raised her hand to her heart in a silent farewell as the woman in the coach did the same. |
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brony1 Citizen
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Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 1:29 pm Post subject: |
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| Turning back she stared at the manor house which appeared to her to be a living thing, holding its breathe in anticipation, of her decision. |
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DeliaM Colonist

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Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 1:53 pm Post subject: |
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| In that moment, she knew what she must do. |
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CarolASpradling Site Admin

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Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 7:37 pm Post subject: |
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Lifting the hem of her dress, she raced across the roadway. _________________ Carol
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brony1 Citizen
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Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 11:44 pm Post subject: |
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Meaghan, squealed as she stepped in a small puddle, splashing muddy water over her already ruined slippers.
(I was going to say she fell flat on her face and broke her ankle but thought better of it ) |
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CarolASpradling Site Admin

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Posted: Tue May 13, 2008 11:46 am Post subject: |
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"Always trying to look your best, I see," said a voice from behind the oak tree. _________________ Carol
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DeliaM Colonist

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Posted: Tue May 13, 2008 2:33 pm Post subject: |
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| At first startled, she was relieved to recognize the voice. |
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CarolASpradling Site Admin

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Posted: Tue May 13, 2008 11:33 pm Post subject: |
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He walked toward her, unbothered by the rain. _________________ Carol
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brony1 Citizen
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Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 4:14 am Post subject: |
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| "Why does he always catch me looking my worst!" Meaghan lamented |
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DeliaM Colonist

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Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 12:28 pm Post subject: |
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| As if reading her mind, her former childhood friend said, "You are lovelier than ever when you are disheveled." |
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CarolASpradling Site Admin

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Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 9:05 pm Post subject: |
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She sneered in his direction and raced toward the house. _________________ Carol
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